Thriller- idea number 1- storyboards and written ideas

These are just some of my initials ideas presented by the story boards. These are not finalized, they are just ideas, which are going to be developed further in time.

This is my very first attempt and my first ideas. However, i have decided that i don't like the last bit, because it doesn't make any sense

Attempt number 2

I liked the first two shots, because it creates tension and that would be the very thing that the audience would see., however i have added a character. A character of a daemon of some sort is following her.

Attempt number 2 continued.....

I have tried to do this so it is more dramatic, by making the demon to come right in front of the woman's  face, and then she screams and then she kills over, which brings us to the extreme shot of an eye and takes us from there to the title sequence, which has now got to do something with the woman and her death.

Location-
The Sherwood forest

Actors-
Ronnie as the girl that is running

Camera and edit-
Laura, Shannon

Shots-
a tracking shot of the girl running
a long shot of the forest
a mid shot of the demon
a close up of the girl's eyes
an extreme close up of the girl's eyes


Edit-
continuity editing
jump cuts where the girl sees someone behind her