Looking at where we are so far, do you think that:

Wednesday, 12 December 2012

The poem...

We have decided to introduce a poem to our consideration and we have found a poem that is quite relevant to our thriller. It is too called Lily and describes her personality more, as we feel that that is what our opening scene is lacking of. It goes as follows:

Lily stares, searching for an answer
the glassy image in the mirror.
A crystal tear falls,
So small, yet holding so much.
She's silent but screaming,
Nobody hears.
This poem is going to go to the end of our opening to add the mysteriousness and also a bit of sympathy. We want to create Lily's character as very confusing at the opening scene.

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